Friday, 16 August 2019
Paragraph writing
I think that summer is the best season of the year because.
In summer you can go swimming at the beach or the river even the pool. Summer is a season when you can do a lot of fun activities. Like fishing,diving,building sand castles and many other stuff.
Personally for me in summer my mood changes. The sun for me just makes me happier. The sun is like a relaxing tool. Then on the other hand, in winter it is more likely to rain. And when it rains I feel miserable and down. But I do like winter because it isn't as hot. And it's nice and cool.
Also I think that in summer I can be with my friends and family more often. Because in winter it is just not the right season. And in summer you can go walking with your dogs or go riding with your horse's. I feel like summer is the most fun season. but it would be more efficient if it was cooler.
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Rangiaue, you have some great reasons for why Summer is better than Winter. I agree that the sun is like a relaxing tool, it can make you feel much happier when you are down. You have attempted to write three clear paragraphs with a new idea for each one.
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